Sunday, September 14, 2008

What i have so far


















this is what I have so far but i'm not quite sure how to finish it. i'm going to make it into an accordion book. i used text from a current book i love (letters to a young poet by rainer maria rilke). tips?


7 comments:

acastrotype said...

Very Classy. Just the last page doesn't get the same vibe as the others. But that is just my personal opinion. :)

fia said...

i do like the second page. I can picture it in my head, on thin newspaper in a large scale.

//Sofia Nilsson Djerf

conor said...

I really like the textures on the pages 1,2,4. I think the last two pages have to much going on

Haley said...

simple and chic. cant wait to see how you expand on these ideas, and push them further.

Port Louis said...

wow. like how the pages evolve.
and how obsessive the use of the type to create the back drop texture.

Katie Jo said...

this is really beautiful and what fun typefaces!

Liz Chan said...

love the texture and elegance. I kind of agree on the last page. It sort of stuck out in comparison with the other ones, but overall it looks really great so far